Aspasia to his Pericles: Please comment on my poem...?

Epimetheus was the brother of Prometheus, the Titan who "stole" the flame (of knowledge, also technology) from Gods, and offered it to the mortals. He was sendenced to be chained in Caucasus...from where Heracles freed him. Now the poem: I am alert and surprised by the aristocracy of poetic thinking of our P., this poetic touch of hers is unique and genuine. It reminds me of poetry of the Byzantine times, around 1000-1200 A.C. I shall add more observations later. Bravo, temporarily.